Finding Bryce (Green Brotherhood: SEAL Team XII Book 1) by Debra Parmley – Review by Torey Foster

Finding Bryce by Debra Parmley
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Finding Bryce is a happily ever after sort of story. Pippa has left her ex husband in jail, changed her name and started a new life. She doesn’t go out a lot but one night finds herself out at a masked party, with a friend, and unexplainably drawn to a handsome stranger. She uncharacteristically has a one night stand, and to keep the excitement alive, they do not exchange information or even remove their masks. 9 months later, baby Bryce is born and Pippa has no way to tell the masked stranger that is his father. When Pippa and little Bryce are suddenly in danger, Diesel is the only one who might be able to save them.
I have to start by saying that I think that this could be an amazing story. It has a great storyline, now it just needs someone to fill in the details. I enjoyed reading it but was left wanting a lot more. I am someone who likes to get lost in the book. I like them to come alive so I can imagine the story happening as it unfolds. This book did not feel like you were there watching it happen. Instead it felt more like someone was telling you a crazy story that happened to their friend a long time ago. There was not time to develop the characters or their relationships.
I think that the author had a great idea for a story and it is a solid foundation. Now it just needs to start building on that foundation. That being said, if you are someone who enjoys their books short and sweet, you will probably really enjoy this novel.

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