Finding Bryce (Green Brotherhood: SEAL Team XII Book 1) by Debra Parmley – Review by Lisa Helmick

Finding Bryce by Debra Parmley
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a okay short story. I did not love it just because I felt there multiple spots where either too much information was given or not enough. The story line is cute and has a bit of suspense. The characters are good as the SEAL’s hold up to being their bossy protective selves. There were characters mentioned that did nothing or were never seen in the book. This just leads to cluttering up the story. In my opinion there is also an issue with what person this story was told at times. This leads to confusion fir the reader.

Like I said above this is an okay story. In my opinion with some cleaning up it could be more. The storyline itself is a nice idea which is what led me to picking this up.

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